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【第1篇】 | 【di 1pian 】 |
【倚 窗 听 雨 】 | 【yi chuang ting yu 】 |
点滴霖霪.,落出整个世界.题记 | dian di lin yin .,la chu zheng ge shi jie .ti ji |
雨是什么?我总爱倚窗听雨,暗自发间.于是,总有一些声音浮动……. | yu shi shen me ?wo zong ai yi chuang ting yu ,an zi fa jian .yu shi ,zong you yi xie sheng yin fu dong ……. |
杜甫笑着说:“那’随风潜入夜,润物细无声’之物为雨。”太白朗声道:“‘白雨跳珠乱入船’岂非雨乎?” | du fu xiao zhao shui :“na ’sui feng qian ru ye ,run wu xi mo sheng ’zhi wu wei yu 。”tai bai lang sheng dao :“‘bai yu tiao zhu luan ru chuan ’qi fei yu hu ?” |
我摇了摇头。我听到的雨声是不能三言两语便能概括的。 | wo yao le yao tou 。wo ting dao de yu sheng shi bu neng san yan liang yu bian neng gai gua de 。 |
佛语有云:“一枝一世界,一花一天堂。”于我,雨声能描绘整个世界。 | fo yu you yun :“yi zhi yi shi jie ,yi hua yi tian tang 。”yu wo ,yu sheng neng miao hui zheng ge shi jie 。 |
我同春雨一道欢欣。窗外雨丝淅沥,屋内我心悠然。春雨的声音有些绵软,沙沙地催醒整个大地。晶晶亮的雨丝,隐约是母亲的低吟,正温柔地唤醒熟睡的孩子。大地被草绿的春装包裹。听得我也笑了,我何尝不也被春雨包围着?同伴的目光,亲人的笑语,是暖阳,将我的心解冻。我的目光偶尔对上了李易安的眼,易安居士微笑着说:“点滴霖霪,叶叶心心,舒卷有余情。”是呵,朋友的温暖,家人的扶持,给了我们一个世界的平能安。余情脉脉。 | wo tong chun yu yi dao huan xin 。chuang wai yu si xi li ,wu nei wo xin you ran 。chun yu de sheng yin you xie mian ruan ,sha sha de cui xing zheng ge da de 。jing jing liang de yu si ,yin yao shi mu qin de di yin ,zheng wen rou de huan xing shou shui de hai zi 。da de bei cao lu de chun zhuang bao guo 。ting de wo ye xiao le ,wo he chang bu ye bei chun yu bao wei zhao ?tong ban de mu guang ,qin ren de xiao yu ,shi nuan yang ,jiang wo de xin jie dong 。wo de mu guang ou er dui shang le li yi an de yan ,yi an ju shi wei xiao zhao shui :“dian di lin yin ,xie xie xin xin ,shu juan you yu qing 。”shi a ,peng you de wen nuan ,jia ren de fu chi ,gei le wo men yi ge shi jie de ping neng an 。yu qing mai mai 。 |
我倾听着雷声阵阵,我同夏雨一道流泪。风雨暴虐地拍打我的窗户。雨声雷声交出来一个哭泣的孩童。他失望,他落寞,他嚣着发泄。我亦然。无数低落在生活中徘徊。当期许落了空;当等待过了保质期;当自己成了受人笑骂的小丑,我便要重重地哭上一番。不在沉默中爆发,就在沉默中灭亡。我未能像雨声一般哭彻云霄,却也了解郁结。随着雨过天晴,彩虹高挂,我抹干了泪迹的脸上,绽出笑颜。易安抚着我的肩说道:“即使雨也疏,风也骤,即使浓睡不了消残酒,即使绿肥红瘦,等出了太阳,开了春,一切都会好起来的。”我点头。是啊,一切都会好起来,因为我们坚信:明天会更好。 | wo qing ting zhao lei sheng zhen zhen ,wo tong xia yu yi dao liu lei 。feng yu bao nve de pai da wo de chuang hu 。yu sheng lei sheng jiao chu lai yi ge ku qi de hai tong 。ta shi wang ,ta la mo ,ta ao zhao fa xie 。wo yi ran 。mo shu di la zai sheng huo zhong pai huai 。dang ji hu la le kong ;dang deng dai guo le bao zhi ji ;dang zi ji cheng le shou ren xiao ma de xiao chou ,wo bian yao chong chong de ku shang yi fan 。bu zai chen mo zhong bao fa ,jiu zai chen mo zhong mie wang 。wo wei neng xiang yu sheng yi ban ku che yun xiao ,que ye le jie yu jie 。sui zhao yu guo tian qing ,cai hong gao gua ,wo ma gan le lei ji de lian shang ,zhan chu xiao yan 。yi an fu zhao wo de jian shui dao :“ji shi yu ye shu ,feng ye zhou ,ji shi nong shui bu le xiao can jiu ,ji shi lu fei gong shou ,deng chu le tai yang ,kai le chun ,yi qie dou hui hao qi lai de 。”wo dian tou 。shi a ,yi qie dou hui hao qi lai ,yin wei wo men jian xin :ming tian hui geng hao 。 |
秋雨之转寒,冬雨之厚重也如春雨般令我顿悟。 | qiu yu zhi zhuai han ,dong yu zhi hou chong ye ru chun yu ban ling wo du wu 。 |
我耳听雨声,眼阅易安词,心思所闻,我便拥有了全世界。 | wo er ting yu sheng ,yan yue yi an ci ,xin sai suo wen ,wo bian yong you le quan shi jie 。 |
物从微处方显博,倾听让我在青春中品位甜蜜。、 | wu cong wei chu fang xian bo ,qing ting rang wo zai qing chun zhong pin wei tian mi 。、 |
我爱倾听,倾听为我撑起一片蓝天。 | wo ai qing ting ,qing ting wei wo cheng qi yi pian lan tian 。 |
〔教师点评〕文章开篇不错,语言充满美的色彩,在与名人的对话中倾听,并注意首尾呼应。 | 〔jiao shi dian ping 〕wen zhang kai pian bu cuo ,yu yan chong man mei de se cai ,zai yu ming ren de dui hua zhong qing ting ,bing zhu yi shou wei hu ying 。 |
【di 1pian 】
【yi chuang ting yu 】
dian di lin yin .,la chu zheng ge shi jie .ti ji
yu shi shen me ?wo zong ai yi chuang ting yu ,an zi fa jian .yu shi ,zong you yi xie sheng yin fu dong …….
du fu xiao zhao shui :“na ’sui feng qian ru ye ,run wu xi mo sheng ’zhi wu wei yu 。”tai bai lang sheng dao :“‘bai yu tiao zhu luan ru chuan ’qi fei yu hu ?”
wo yao le yao tou 。wo ting dao de yu sheng shi bu neng san yan liang yu bian neng gai gua de 。
fo yu you yun :“yi zhi yi shi jie ,yi hua yi tian tang 。”yu wo ,yu sheng neng miao hui zheng ge shi jie 。
wo tong chun yu yi dao huan xin 。chuang wai yu si xi li ,wu nei wo xin you ran 。chun yu de sheng yin you xie mian ruan ,sha sha de
cui xing zheng ge da de 。jing jing liang de yu si ,yin yao shi mu qin de di yin ,zheng wen rou de huan xing shou shui de hai zi 。da de bei cao lu de chun zhuang bao guo 。ting de wo ye xiao le ,wo he chang bu ye bei chun yu bao wei zhao ?tong ban de mu guang ,qin ren de xiao yu ,shi nuan yang ,jiang wo de xin jie dong 。wo de mu guang ou er dui shang le li yi an de yan ,yi an ju shi wei xiao zhao shui :“dian di lin yin ,xie xie xin xin ,shu juan you yu qing 。”shi a ,peng you de wen nuan ,jia ren de fu chi ,gei le wo men yi ge shi jie de ping neng an 。yu qing mai mai 。
wo qing ting zhao lei sheng zhen zhen ,wo tong xia yu yi dao liu lei 。feng yu bao nve de pai da wo de chuang hu 。yu sheng lei sheng jiao chu lai yi ge ku qi de hai tong 。ta shi wang ,ta la mo ,ta ao zhao fa xie 。wo yi ran 。mo shu di la zai sheng huo zhong pai huai 。dang ji hu la le kong ;dang deng dai guo le bao zhi ji ;dang zi ji cheng le shou ren xiao ma de xiao chou ,wo bian yao chong chong de ku shang yi fan 。bu zai chen mo zhong bao fa ,jiu zai chen mo zhong mie wang 。wo wei neng xiang yu sheng yi ban ku che yun xiao ,que ye le jie yu jie 。sui zhao yu guo tian qing ,cai hong gao gua ,wo ma gan le lei ji de lian shang ,zhan chu xiao yan 。yi an fu zhao wo de jian shui dao :“ji shi yu ye shu ,feng ye zhou ,ji shi nong shui bu le xiao can jiu ,ji shi lu fei gong shou ,deng chu le tai yang ,kai le chun ,yi qie dou hui hao qi lai de 。”wo dian tou 。shi a ,yi qie dou hui hao qi lai ,yin wei wo men jian xin :ming tian hui geng hao 。
qiu yu zhi zhuai han ,dong yu zhi hou chong ye ru chun yu ban ling wo du wu 。
wo er ting yu sheng ,yan yue yi an ci ,xin sai suo wen ,wo bian yong you le quan shi jie 。
wu cong wei chu fang xian bo ,qing ting rang wo zai qing chun zhong pin wei tian mi 。、
wo ai qing ting ,qing ting wei wo cheng qi yi pian lan tian 。
〔jiao shi dian ping 〕wen zhang kai pian bu cuo ,yu yan chong man mei de se cai ,zai yu ming ren de dui hua zhong qing ting ,bing zhu yi shou wei hu ying 。
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